Wednesday, July 25, 2018

Descriptive Writing 2.0

A strong arm wrapped around my neck. I feel like I have nearly snapped my collarbone.The sweet taste of blood is hanging in my mouth. The crowd goes wild as I get smashed. Some Tigers supporters laugh at me. I wish that I could be on the Tigers instead of the Bulldogs. Everything looks like a blur but I can make out the Tigers player getting me down. I'm trying to untangle that arm from around my neck but it is to strong.I'm pretty sure to be a penalty.I thought we were going to win but then it turns out the tigers smashed us. I wish it wasn't on the news. I found this writing fun.

Wednesday, June 27, 2018

Challenges with living on Mars

Return Ticket please SJ 2.1.00

Work in pairs or individually to find information in the text and organise it into a table. (First one has been done for you.)

Challenges with living on Mars

Need 

Challenge

Oxygen
Not enough on Mars so people could not breathe the air
Food
No food on Mars.

water

No water on Mars.

Meterrates

Meterrates shot from the ground.

Imaginary planet



Imaginary Planet Information Report


Use your planning from earlier in the week to sort your ideas into paragraphs. You may add the heading in a blue box after discussing with the teacher.

Hot pools


Keywords
Hot pools
Ground Muddy and clean Fizzy Coke Sticky Relax Calm Nice L&P


Topic sentence
On Mars 2.0 there are really nice relaxing hot pools.
Elaboration (supporting ideas / information)
The hot pools are really muddy so people can relax in them. People get sticky when they get out of the fizzy, coke and l&p hot pools.

Flora and Fauna


Keywords

Rains Kim Jong Un.

When Kim Jong Un lands he runs around with his guards.

Look crazy

Green

Guns

Helicopters

nucks


Topic sentence

On Mars 2.0 it rains Kim Jong Un


Elaboration (supporting ideas / information)


Instead of raining water, there are millions of Kim Jong Un's raining down on .


When Kim Jong Un lands he runs around with his guards who land in helicopters


Then Kim Jong Un call in the nucks.


All his guards are green.


The guards all have guns.


All the guards are run around like nerds and fart so they go faster.


Concluding sentence

Keywords

Shamey Deer Sheep Pig Cheetahs Dog Cat Buffalo Sloth Bear


Topic sentence

Mars 2.0 has so many animals.


Elaboration
(supporting ideas / information)

There are Shamey, Deer, Sheep, Pig, Cheetahs, Dog, Cat, Buffalo, Sloth and Bear. You need to watch out for the bears because they could just be around the corner. Farmers sometimes keep sheep and pigs for pets and for farming. Since there is so much wild life there are lots of bushes too.


Concluding sentence