Imaginary planet

Imaginary Planet Information Report


Use your planning from earlier in the week to sort your ideas into paragraphs. You may add the heading in a blue box after discussing with the teacher.

Hot pools


Keywords
Hot pools
Ground Muddy and clean Fizzy Coke Sticky Relax Calm Nice L&P


Topic sentence
On Mars 2.0 there are really nice relaxing hot pools.
Elaboration (supporting ideas / information)
The hot pools are really muddy so people can relax in them. People get sticky when they get out of the fizzy, coke and l&p hot pools.

Flora and Fauna


Keywords

Rains Kim Jong Un.

When Kim Jong Un lands he runs around with his guards.

Look crazy

Green

Guns

Helicopters

nucks


Topic sentence

On Mars 2.0 it rains Kim Jong Un


Elaboration (supporting ideas / information)


Instead of raining water, there are millions of Kim Jong Un's raining down on .


When Kim Jong Un lands he runs around with his guards who land in helicopters


Then Kim Jong Un call in the nucks.


All his guards are green.


The guards all have guns.


All the guards are run around like nerds and fart so they go faster.


Concluding sentence

Keywords

Shamey Deer Sheep Pig Cheetahs Dog Cat Buffalo Sloth Bear


Topic sentence

Mars 2.0 has so many animals.


Elaboration (supporting ideas / information)

There are Shamey, Deer, Sheep, Pig, Cheetahs, Dog, Cat, Buffalo, Sloth and Bear. You need to watch out for the bears because they could just be around the corner. Farmers sometimes keep sheep and pigs for pets and for farming. Since there is so much wild life there are lots of bushes too.


Concluding sentence