Jack R @ Kumara School: A POEM OF MY MY HOLIDAY

Tuesday, June 9, 2020

A POEM OF MY MY HOLIDAY

Coarse sand whipping at thy ankles!

Waves crashing like a falling plane!

A fun holiday with great family!

Running up and down the beach!

Got really super good Skim boarding waves!

Annoying brother staring out of windows!

2 comments:

JulieJune 9, 2020 at 10:31 PM
Great, exciting poem Jack- well done! Not sure about the last line though... or perhaps this is Charlie's poem?
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About Me

Hi. My name Jack, I live in Kumara, I am 9 years old and a yr 5. I go to Kumara School. I have a brother called Charlie he is 6 years old. My Mum is called Julie and my Dad is called Kris. I have a dog called Rimu, he is 11 years old. I like most sports. My teacher is called Mr. Fogerty.

I like writing. I am good at writing my teacher makes us do lots of writing. But I don’t really mind that much.

In Rugby my team was undefeated for the whole season except in the last game when we lost by one try.